Until 1:11 it was very nice. The harp in the backround doenst always fit to the part youre playing. After 1:11 the organ or whatever does not really fit to the part.
Except that, it is a very nice composition from you. Not your best, but it was very nice. I hope that youll take the challenge of this song once more, because you were close to an improvement of the original song. And you made this in march. Youre now better :3